Sunday, December 5, 2010

Tefnut sketches

1 comment:

Kali Ciesemier said...

Hmm, you could probably go with either image, with some changes. It's hard to tell what's happening in the bottom image right now, the hand is getting cut off and it looks sort of like jesus on the cross. Maybe the figure centered more, moved up, and in a position where we can see what the hands are doing? (cupping the tree?)The top image might be a little better, since we can easily see the tears. For the top image I would move the lady closer to the top border, maybe even have the top of her head cut off, the space above the woman isn't serving much purpose right now. Centering her face slightly more would be good too. Have a hand or two touching/holding the tree. Does that help? Good luck! :)